Tommy Croke
Tommy Croke

what you wanted

what you wanted

94 Plays

05 Apr 2023

Is this recorded? Is this my life now? Should I stay strong and should I be proud? Of what I’ve made for all to see now can I smile can I weep now, friendssss are the dark epitome, initially to what you see, they say can you see thee sea, for all those to take in, breatheee, breathe just breathe just breatheeeee, breathe just breathe just breatheeee, breathe just breathe just breatheeeee,breathe just breathe then freeze,for the dark ritually they set in threes, not to be passed with ease, wipe off all the fleas, feel them scatter through your body, flick them off like it’s a hobby, eating your skin they must feel haughty, but I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t naughty, but you still my shawty, but you must be sorely mistaken if you think I haven’t awakened, you haven’t even seen my beginning how are you gonna call it the end, I wish I was changing, wish I could change againnnnnn, wish I could change again

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💯 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

1 year ago

I think you’re trying to do too much high pitch voice in this, change it up a lil bit! Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Great 🎉

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