what you wanted

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Is this recorded? Is this my life now? Should I stay strong and should I be proud? Of what I’ve made for all to see now can I smile can I weep now, friendssss are the dark epitome, initially to what you see, they say can you see thee sea, for all those to take in, breatheee, breathe just breathe just breatheeeee, breathe just breathe just breatheeee, breathe just breathe just breatheeeee,breathe just breathe then freeze,for the dark ritually they set in threes, not to be passed with ease, wipe off all the fleas, feel them scatter through your body, flick them off like it’s a hobby, eating your skin they must feel haughty, but I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t naughty, but you still my shawty, but you must be sorely mistaken if you think I haven’t awakened, you haven’t even seen my beginning how are you gonna call it the end, I wish I was changing, wish I could change againnnnnn, wish I could change again

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Tommy Croke

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3 years ago

See track description ↑

Shann Cromwell

3 years ago

I think you’re trying to do too much high pitch voice in this, change it up a lil bit! Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Great 🎉

WIATT CHRYSTALS

3 years ago

SOLID MY BRO KEEP IT UP Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Debo.Da.Don

3 years ago

keep doing yo thang fam let that shit out 🔥✊🏾💯😎💯✊🏾🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Molly of grimmifix

3 years ago

keep it up keep practicing and you'll make it better and you'll do good every single time try to make every song better than the last one

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @rzt7hf9xpi, Nice job on your first track 'what you wanted'! 1. Try recording a freestyle vid next! Here you can really show the rest of the app your true passion for rap! 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

BB Mill 👉™️

3 years ago

💯 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

👑MrEmanuel myseteri 🏆🌈

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

🏆Risky CEO E solo👑 🙏

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Magnolia Fresh

3 years ago

🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯