My first track
Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself
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just stay active and U will climb the charts fast and easy 💯
KEEP IT UP AND CONTINUED SUCCESS 💯💯💯💯
Now that's what we're talking about @mccarrypot, Nice job on your first track 'My first track '! 1. Take some inspiration from a range of genres and styles, this way you can create a sound truly unique to you! 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Decent Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: On point 🎯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯