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#GPKimd0ne00miX @doehash 🖤🔪 GPK🚫 im d0ne (•0n•0ne•miX•)

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4 years ago

See track description

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3 years ago

this is what abuse sound like 🤣

4 years ago

Nice rhyme schemes

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100% of what you said rhymed. 15% of what you said made sense. 45% of the song was interesting. This is due to maintaining one flow in a repetitive pattern. Doesn't sound bad, but it does get old after the first minute. 10% likely to replay. This is the most honest feedback you could ever receive. At least from me.

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4 years ago

I believe it's good, however your style is cool, although you do a lot of repeats in every track. example, glove and dove, glove up not a bar on your track but hoping you get where I'm coming at. the beat is good, however needs to bump more I have v-moda headphones and all settings are up and its not that bumping. I think rap needs to relate to like rock loud asf however subwoofer style. I like the verse, but where's the hook as well? 😉 I hope your next track has a hook. it's good overall tho if I had to say as is. your style is different and I kind of want to take the example I made and do the same a bit with mine just not too many of them like you have. keep going fam, you doing good.

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4 years ago

💯🔥🔥🔥💯

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👿🫡

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4 years ago

"I'm purely nuts but don't act squirrely" was my favorite bar out of this 😅🔥

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