love the slow drums and the singing... sounds like trippy rock like Nirvana but rapping, i like your wordplay and can feel your story and your emotion but however you repeat yourself alot and too many times you use the words mother fuckin, fuckin or fuck otherwise it's a banger good work bro
Hey @cautionvcarson!
Thanks for sharing 'Forever Young (21:04:55)' with us! 💥
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love the slow drums and the singing... sounds like trippy rock like Nirvana but rapping, i like your wordplay and can feel your story and your emotion but however you repeat yourself alot and too many times you use the words mother fuckin, fuckin or fuck otherwise it's a banger good work bro
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Hey @cautionvcarson! Thanks for sharing 'Forever Young (21:04:55)' with us! 💥 Here are a couple tips: 1. Try trimming your audio clips in the Studio to remove unwanted sounds! 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? 4. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎
keep doing what you do best brother and I promise you would see yourself topping charts
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