moms mistake
you been stressing i can see it in your face u looking like u lost the race feeling out of place how could this happen when u was the one always laughing nothing go u down never wear a froun tell me what happend when you was just when you was just u was smiling play time whiling always the gurl niggas wanted but could never have like that too brand desiner bag love just up for grabs hopes of falling she had it bad he broke her down now she broken now she sad breaking all her shit guess shes mad shes got it bad you been stressing i can see it in your face u looking like u lost the race feeling out of place how could this happen when u was the one always laughing nothing go u down never wear a froun tell me what happend when you was just when you was just smiling now she out on the town again no one around again feeling down again but holding it in she calls all her friends they partying she no longer agruing she now starving then she sees his post late night drunk at he from doing the most another baby on the way she overdose guess she cought the holy ghost and he didnt know he didnt show cuz he moved on he let her go you been stressing i can see it in your face u looking like u lost the race feeling out of place how could this happen when u was the one always laughing nothing go u down never wear a froun tell me what happend when you was just when you was just so I guess this is also where the description would go ๐คญ๐๐คฃ I wrote this song to tell my story in the very last verse was a freestyle that just kind of came out it's a true story and it's a deep story and unfortunately the end result is a story that doesn't end up being told because the end results inevitability is that you're not here to tell it I was blessed to be able to so it's a rough draft and I plan on eventually sending it in to get work but understand that this song is very close and personal to me thank you #painsong #truestory #onmyphone#new#reallyfeltthis#ruffdraft
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Waddup @dextersdezi! Let's dive into our report for 'moms mistake ' shall we? ๐ Track Artwork โ Track Length โญ๏ธ Title โ Description โ Bars โ Cadence/Flow โ Delivery โ Vibe โ Concept โ Trending โญ๏ธ Recording quality ๐ - Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! ๐ง Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐ โญ - Feature Worthy โ - Good Start ๐ - Needs Improvement
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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