my life
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My life Everything I’ve ever wanted never came true hanging on to life it’s starting to get loose always wanted to swing at my dreams like babe Ruth I had to start caring a pistol so I could see the truth now I’m at the top used to be at the root shoot him in is head make his whole body Droop put the lightning to his doom shick shock Electrocute I had a hard life so you know how I’m coming hopin from house to house one outfit straight bummin
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My life Everything I’ve ever wanted never came true hanging on to life it’s starting to get loose always wanted to swing at my dreams like babe Ruth I had to start caring a pistol so I could see the truth now I’m at the top used to be at the root shoot him in is head make his whole body Droop put the lightning to his doom shick shock Electrocute I had a hard life so you know how I’m coming hopin from house to house one outfit straight bummin
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Good one man ! Keep working you’ll get there 🧨
It’s a nice vibe the energy could be a little better
Keep pushing my brother 🙏💯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Now that's what we're talking about @chipawa, Nice job on your first track 'my life'! 1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars! 2. Once you find a good recording set up, stick with it! Rapping is all about consistency, try and apply this to every level of your music! 3. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? 4. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! 5. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! 🔥 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
KILLED IT 😵