I like it! you have a good developing flow, some lines I don't think work together personally but that's really not my place to judge. this isn't for me, it's for you. I didn't write it so I can't really fully understand. however, I feel like you are adding more than what is needed, some lines you can cut off if it fits better two or 3 words before where you wanted and continue. keep practicing man, I'm going to keep an eye out for your content. ๐
Bars: Can improve ๐
Delivery: On point ๐ฏ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @nastyemperor4,
Our report for 'A letter to God' is finally here, take a look! ๐
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Your track made it to our 'Rap Fame Daily' playlist ๐ฅณ! Well done!
You can find it on the Discovery Page ๐
We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
โญ - Feature Worthy
โ - Good Start
๐ - Needs Improvement
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I like it! you have a good developing flow, some lines I don't think work together personally but that's really not my place to judge. this isn't for me, it's for you. I didn't write it so I can't really fully understand. however, I feel like you are adding more than what is needed, some lines you can cut off if it fits better two or 3 words before where you wanted and continue. keep practicing man, I'm going to keep an eye out for your content. ๐ Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @nastyemperor4, Our report for 'A letter to God' is finally here, take a look! ๐ Track Artwork ๐ Track Length โญ๏ธ Title โ Description ๐ Bars โ Cadence/Flow โ Delivery โ Vibe โ Concept โญ๏ธ Trending โญ๏ธ Recording quality โ Your track made it to our 'Rap Fame Daily' playlist ๐ฅณ! Well done! You can find it on the Discovery Page ๐ We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐ โญ - Feature Worthy โ - Good Start ๐ - Needs Improvement
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