Jay

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Jay

yo im jay im here as a new kid people not wanna make a bet people thinking im not gonna fit and i be coming there with a new kit then yall be tryna fit in my grid yo voice so thin nigga you got a pitch turn around so i can make you my Bitch you be squirting black like a squid then after that imma give you a tip looking like an ass with a Pimple and acting like life gonna get simple lets sit and talk lets be civil stop being fake stop being artificial walking like an asshole falling in a pothole history they say arsehole nigga playing hardball becoming a handful tryna clime a flagpole face like a manhole

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3 years ago

yo im jay im here as a new kid people not wanna make a bet people thinking im not gonna fit and i be coming there with a new kit then yall be tryna fit in my grid yo voice so thin nigga you got a pitch turn around so i can make you my Bitch you be squirting black like a squid then after that imma give you a tip looking like an ass with a Pimple and acting like life gonna get simple lets sit and talk lets be civil stop being fake stop being artificial walking like an asshole falling in a pothole history they say arsehole nigga playing hardball becoming a handful tryna clime a flagpole face like a manhole

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

Keep goin bruh 💯 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

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3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

sounds pretty good....... keep working.......✌🏾

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3 years ago

good job for a first track all I say is just keep grinding and I fuck with the fast flow💯

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3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: On point 🎯

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3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

Yo @jay31! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'Jay'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 4. The track here is way too short, send us a longer track so we can help you improve! 5. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

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