coldshowdaz

2 years ago

I love the topic of this track. The delivery isn’t very interesting but your words make sense. Try using a different tempo with the same flow or style. Plus try not to sound like your reading. Overall I give this track a 6.5

MEZMER

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.