Fatboy OMB
Fatboy OMB

to my ex boyfriend

to my ex boyfriend

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03 Jan 2023

you broke me like a joke I couldn't hold it in I couldn't put it in the past yea can't believe I let you in you think you achieve guess that I was just a fool you think your cool breaking hearts I'm taking the pain everyday my brain hurts everyday it got worse everyday I lay down crying everyday but not anymore I hope you stay far away from me I guess I was a just a toy for you to play with I wanna destroy your life im gonna live without you yeah

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keep working on your craft you'll be on top

2 years ago

good luck with the rest of the day and I

2 years ago

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