Take One

Name: Take One
Description: Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Haitian Bob

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Yo @haitianbob! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'Take One'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. The demo track can really help to nail the flow on this one, delivery is important! 🎤 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Defo try out our denoise feature to minimize any background noise on your track! 🤫 6. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 7. Make the step up to the Rap Fame Studio to produce a full track! Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! 🔥 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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