Hey @seanyrayhobbs,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'shatii '! π₯
"Let's find out who dissed you, let's go solve solve his issue" We really loved the chill sounds on your hook, came across super well.
Your verses were a little quiet though, next time try and turn them up and add some more aggression, they were getting hidden by the beat.
Loving the concept of this track, it's got real emotion and real purpose. π
Real chill, we love this vibe and it's helped by that super mellow beat choice - don't listen while driving! π
This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π―
Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @seanyrayhobbs, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'shatii '! π₯ "Let's find out who dissed you, let's go solve solve his issue" We really loved the chill sounds on your hook, came across super well. Your verses were a little quiet though, next time try and turn them up and add some more aggression, they were getting hidden by the beat. Loving the concept of this track, it's got real emotion and real purpose. π Real chill, we love this vibe and it's helped by that super mellow beat choice - don't listen while driving! π This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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