Graham Hewitt

my first (also this was rec when I woke up so it is bad)

Graham Hewitt
my first (also this was rec when I woke up so it is bad)

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26 Aug 2022

Whoa whoa whoa I can see it in your eyes that I am slowly fading, I know I’m not perfect but there is nothing of me remaining, I know that I can get it right but not with you baby, whoa whoa whoa whoa, I know that this wasn’t right, I can do it but there is no light, I know I can get it right but not tonight, my love was fading, whoa whoa whoa whoa, you can hear my tears over the phone because I want you back and I can’t leve you alone and you have a man and I am alone this is not meant for me but this is what we doing, whoa, this would have worked but it didn’t work, ya I be tripping you know I want you because you were the only thing keeping me living, I know that you know that your amazing, whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa, I can see it in your eyes that I am slowly fading, I know I’m not perfect but there it nothing of me remaining, I know that I can get it right, just not with you baby, whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa so look at what I did I messed up and this is it, I could have should have done better but that’s not what I did I can hold someone just not you like a little kid, we should have been what we would have been but I did, now you have a man and a kid now I’m planning my funeral for me and my ghost and there ain’t no one to give me a toast, whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa I can see in your eyes that I am slowly fading, I know I’m not perfect but there is nothing of me remaining I can do it right at least not with you baby whoa whoa whoa whoa

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

2 years ago

Yo @grahamhewitt! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'my first (also this was rec when I woke up so it is bad)'! 💥 You got some good ideas behind this track, we like the hook section, the repetition definitely helps it stick in our heads. "I can see it in your eyes that I am slowly fading" - this defo our favourite part! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Keeping being yourself and doing your thing! Real authenticity can really make people love your music! ‍🔥 -Try improving your timing on this one, at the moment you're missing the beat a decent amount, but this would be really cool vibes when you perfect the delivery! We got faith! 🙏 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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