Die tryin
Donnie pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you dear, Guard tried playing hero Donnie showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And her smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank.
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Donnie pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you dear, Guard tried playing hero Donnie showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And her smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank.
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Hey @rezalattasofficial, We're gonna review your track 'Die tryin'. Let's get it! "Tryna find a quick way to come up with some cash, toss the piece in the river and clothes in the trash" damn this so descriptive dawg! We feel like we there with you! Rate the intro on this one, just a quick Yo & you going In! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try to improve the quality of your recording, it will really improve the sound of your track! ✨ - Keep being yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! 🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 Right now its cool but we know you can come with some professional sh*t! - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 -Try and end the track less abruptly for a more pro feel We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Nice track keep em coming.....Dope potential....
What's up @rezalattasofficial, Thanks for the sharing 'Die tryin', here's our two cents on uploading tracks to Rap Fame! 💥 1. Try out some more Masterclasses to really get a feel for how the best do it! 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! Send your track to Hot for some feedback from us, we'd love to hear your tracks! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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