Directness (09:55)
i sit and trip on this thing called life wondering if all my wrongs been right or do i still got that karma coming ill take that shit running i dont understand why fools scraed to die or why moms have to cry when they got to lose a son man im bout done fucking even trying, whats the point we all dying fools be lying, down with the enemy trying to get me to fail, some say life is hell never thought the homie would tell, but shit seems to go all sideways never thought thaty my ways would have effect on so many people some know about the real evil thats roams this earth i feel cursed since birth but always keep inside tried to hide the hurt that i feel, man is this even real says she loves me but wants me to feel all the pain and suffering i caused feel like I'm stuck inside oz and maybe that wizard can send me back, but i dont know how to act
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