Hi there @daballa,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Gram Girls - Daballa ', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
"Look at my wrist and it's hot" π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
Solid mix, the recording quality is great! β You seriously sound professional, this is insane audio quality well done π
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
βKey improvement to help your track get featured: There are just some things that need changing! You are so close, just try and end the track more timely, it goes on for a while without any rapping. Also, try customising your album cover! You are really close!
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi there @daballa, Here's some feedback on your track 'Gram Girls - Daballa ', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ "Look at my wrist and it's hot" π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Solid mix, the recording quality is great! β You seriously sound professional, this is insane audio quality well done π Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ βKey improvement to help your track get featured: There are just some things that need changing! You are so close, just try and end the track more timely, it goes on for a while without any rapping. Also, try customising your album cover! You are really close! We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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