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Jen Nidasio

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4 years ago

Young MILITIA

4 years ago

what's good my boy welcome to rap fam I am young Militia independent hip-hop artists and judge critique aficionado I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do!

Brad Sams

2 years ago

they not ready....lol

Ahdi Chin ✔️

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Jen Nidasio

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4 years ago

yeah I'm not independent I am looking for those artist tho hmu..

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @raiden_ink, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at '#firstshots'! 💥 "you all be playing lines, I saying mine" Your bars are real good, and your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ keep doin' what your doin'. We think the delivery is fire too, plus we love the beat, full of intense energy for you to pop off on. 🧨 This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix, especially on the 2nd vocal line. - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

XaNdEr

4 years ago

nice work fam keep it up and don't give up

Jen Nidasio

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4 years ago

@joseph.7302623 hey brother thanks raiden_ink here appreciate the words ima try to drop something decent soon look forward to speaking to ya

Da Real One

4 years ago

nice track beat selection perfect hope you continue making one of this

Jen Nidasio

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