Not Trapped in Pt2

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rollin my leaf in the back of the store, do u have guts to bag this lil hoe, some call it trapped how im trappin my flow, smooth as the creek the minerals kno, this d repeat hit or miss on, i dont use sheets this lyric off dome, but its at pad the crib have him stoned, u need a stick n fee by the loan, taxin these niggas i need me a boat, i aint no freak im fuckin a hoe, let me get deep not a pumpernickel , fresh on the bread ima keep by a scope lookin my vision in eyes of the soul, i let u talk but im mindin my own, varied opinions his variants strong, i get yo bitch to break on yo toes, she a track star ima land by the shore, is that horizon up in her glow, spec of the the eye to the dust, i dont want lust, i dont give a fucks what she cookin wit coals i kno some ladies that done a good job,ten toes down n they kitchen is clean no sex involved she holdin it down, independent poppin her shit by the rounds, i got my loc cuz beside me breakin her down, kno him as brother from another mother god blessin the child, no we aint shoppin we sellin it now, i fucks wit solids we passin it out, aint none of watered down niggas in drought, do it make sense to yah right rite now, nowadays i been brainstorming aloud, dawg he's been thinking bout hustling how, a nigga hands on i aint havin no doubts, i get to ball wit a floater and bounce, the og's get credit the real ones from mouth, north to the west to the east to the south, i keep on rappin my prize but how u unravel.

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TeaThaVeg(2@ccount)

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @teathav3g, It's time for us to take a look at 'Not Trapped in Pt2'! 💥 Quiet 🤫 - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those 🎧 for the best results. "I don't use sheets this lyric off dome" 🧠 💥 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! We're digging your delivery on this one, the skill and confidence is clear. Loving the flow on this, you're smooth with it 🌊 Work on the audio quality, this is our main improvement! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TlNonly Cierra King

4 years ago

Keep up the flow! You got this! I enjoyed this creativity! Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Dozenaire TRu

2 months ago

Your sound breaks the mold, I'm in disbelief! 😱 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Marckel🗽🎤🤴🏾♎️⚖️

5 months ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

7 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥