givin it a shot
Nathan DowellThis my first track , I included the lyrics for reference since I messed up a bit and audio is bad. But let me know what y’all think 1. Aye , I know it’s been a tough year 2. It’s got a little better but I ain’t in the clear 3. Just wishin I could just get my life in gear 4. But I’m blinded in the headlights all struck by fear 5. Sometimes I just don’t know how I feel 6. So I keep a close circle , hard to tell what’s real 7. It’s been getting kinda hard to keep control of the wheel 8. So I try to tell myself the situations ideal 9. But I’ve been moving up ive been building a hustle 10. It’s time to get some gloves on and clean up this rubble 11. These changes that I’m makin yeah they might seem subtle 12. But the water in the pot is finally Startin to bubble 13. And I got my goals set further than the stars 14. Maybe someday I’ll make cash off these bars 15. Make a few albums and buy a few cars 16. Make the other rappers wonder how I got my start and this it
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @ebtemdqyex, It's time for us to take a look at 'givin it a shot'! 💥 "But I’ve been moving up ive been building a hustle" you took us on a journey with this track. Really went from low to high - seems like your careers about to take off! Your flow is amazing, keep that good work up!! 🎆 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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