D N D - make you proud 2022-08-24
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โข24 Aug 2022
a mate of mine. sent me 8 bars starting 2 verses off. so i asked.. do u mind if i add to it? he said no and asked me to spit it. so I did and here are the results. give credit to my mate asbo and enjoy the music of #hiphop
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi @dnd95! Welcome to our feedback of 'D N D - make you proud 2022-08-24 '! ๐ฅ "Two beautiful flowers have blossomed, wow, daddy's proud! " ๐Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. ๐ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Real dope story to this track, you have purpose and meaning in your baes, we love that ๐ช This time you just missed out on Featuring ๐, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic๐ค before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! โจ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! โ๐ฅ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! ๐ - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! ๐ฏ Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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