D N D - make you proud 2022-08-24
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a mate of mine. sent me 8 bars starting 2 verses off. so i asked.. do u mind if i add to it? he said no and asked me to spit it. so I did and here are the results. give credit to my mate asbo and enjoy the music of #hiphop
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Um Wut Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
Hi @dnd95! Welcome to our feedback of 'D N D - make you proud 2022-08-24 '! ๐ฅ "Two beautiful flowers have blossomed, wow, daddy's proud! " ๐Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. ๐ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ถ Real dope story to this track, you have purpose and meaning in your baes, we love that ๐ช This time you just missed out on Featuring ๐, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic๐ค before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! โจ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! โ๐ฅ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! ๐ - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! ๐ฏ Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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this song is a really good song .. I love the accent.. awesome song Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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nice yo Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
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Very nice love your lyrics and flow ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ awesome ๐ keep up the good work darling ๐ฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Fire Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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don't stop !!! love this ๐ โค always love from my side Allah Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
great stuff Bars: Good ๐ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Nice ๐
You have skill for sure. Need to work on your mixing. Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
nice Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Good ๐
great brodie could do better Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ