Hi @kidkush96!
Welcome to our feedback of 'just woke up '! π₯
"I'm doing this for my mama my bro my little sister do this for my dad doing this because I said I'm gonna do it now I'm goin through it make the crowd go stupid" so much emotion and energy in your rhymes. It really came through in this track and we were on that journey with you.
You fell off the beat just a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Lovely mellow beat beneath the track, really floaty sounds that infuse your bars with hope.
That cover art is on point, smoking skeleton with the text - really well picked.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
βKey improvement to help your track get featured:
Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! π§
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @kidkush96! Welcome to our feedback of 'just woke up '! π₯ "I'm doing this for my mama my bro my little sister do this for my dad doing this because I said I'm gonna do it now I'm goin through it make the crowd go stupid" so much emotion and energy in your rhymes. It really came through in this track and we were on that journey with you. You fell off the beat just a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Lovely mellow beat beneath the track, really floaty sounds that infuse your bars with hope. That cover art is on point, smoking skeleton with the text - really well picked. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ βKey improvement to help your track get featured: Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! π§ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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