Hi there @sj_22,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Allnight(Prod.Paryo)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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This my first song that I published
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Hi there @sj_22, Here's some feedback on your track 'Allnight(Prod.Paryo)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
really nice for your first song bro, this is hard! Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
π―π₯π―π₯ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK FAM RT G SALUTE FAM FWM #ROYALTYRADIO SUBSCRIBE to THE PLAYLIST FAM NEW UP #IKEEPFALLINGLSK AND #KINGOFTHE90SLSK
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The repetition kinda killed it for me. Some more variety could elevate it! π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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