What's up @brookstarink,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'don't talk to me '! 💥
Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great!
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 You have anger in this track, we can feel it 🔥 You clearly have a purpose behind your bars, we like when tracks have meaning!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼
Just keep working on improving that audio quality, we can see that potential in you, but your lyrics just aren’t coming through clearly for us. Improving the clarity in your bars will do a world of difference!
There is some background noise! f you remove this it would level the track up also!
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
I'm a Master Occultist and I have ate the fruit of the tree of knowledge of Good and Evil myself so what the Fuck is the Elite going to do to me when I get famous? Honor my black ass and bow down to my feet and I will give Glory all to God in the end.
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@brooklynbouncecrew #brookstarink
flows are fire but you can hear the mic hitting stuff. just hold it a lil out by your jawline and it wo t do that.
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Nobody will get in my way. I don't give a Fuck I just play around rap battling souls on the side on rapfame.
Horus.. you need the depot
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What's up @brookstarink, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'don't talk to me '! 💥 Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 You have anger in this track, we can feel it 🔥 You clearly have a purpose behind your bars, we like when tracks have meaning! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Just keep working on improving that audio quality, we can see that potential in you, but your lyrics just aren’t coming through clearly for us. Improving the clarity in your bars will do a world of difference! There is some background noise! f you remove this it would level the track up also! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I'm a Master Occultist and I have ate the fruit of the tree of knowledge of Good and Evil myself so what the Fuck is the Elite going to do to me when I get famous? Honor my black ass and bow down to my feet and I will give Glory all to God in the end.
I'm not sworn to secrecy of any degree of a secret society.
I will be the new King of the Illuminatee one day lol. The Elite can't take me out I even greater knowledge than them.
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