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Yo @rawraw.7568126! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'RedParis - Bad Wishes '! π₯ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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