Hey @pokedabrainofficial,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '#AintNoRookie-'! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π
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Just keep working on improving that audio quality, we can see that potential in you, but your lyrics just arenβt coming through clearly for us. Improving the clarity in your bars will do a world of difference!
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @pokedabrainofficial, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '#AintNoRookie-'! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ So much energy in this, you left it all on track, the beta helped with this as well! π π₯΅ Good use of effects, your voice sounds dope! Just keep working on improving that audio quality, we can see that potential in you, but your lyrics just arenβt coming through clearly for us. Improving the clarity in your bars will do a world of difference! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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