Failed Father
@moderator_en #rapfamesmostwanted #FUCKSOLOSAVAGES #DISSTRACKSOON So Depressed I think Its about time I chill, on the crazy white boy shit and admit I got to chill on this side, just smoke that weed all night, feelin right, feelin nice. Wiz Khalifa on the sourround sound, thinking it's my time, hoping for peace, god hopefully, putting them demons to sleep, theyre so loud, wondering where my life went now, spent on what? Penitentiary nights, that shit got me in a slump, still waking up in cold sweats, I just need a seraquil, I just need to take, my life a little more seriously, so I can put them demons to sleep, finally, god I pray finally, finally, finally... oh finally...... put these demons to sleep I put em to sleep I put them to sleep And now its time to put them demons to sleep... I guess we'll see... life's a lottery... WeGood and holy fuck I won it. You tellin me, went from prison, to prospect, from losing, to top shelf? Money for days I wont stop yet, growing this weed like a professional, I wont stop or quit. Bars for days like a prorep. Gucci shades and my bitch gotta a berkin, she twerkin, up on the pole with them strippas! But what fuck is this? I think I forgot one thing, what was it? OH shit! All this money and women and booze did I forget? I gotta be trippin... Im not winnin... I deserved prison... and all of the bad that will happen now that I didnt stay humble and I only balled out, fucked now, im an alcoholic, cheating loser, woman abuser, fucked up his own life type of pukeshit... I left the one thing behind that no man should leave behind. And that was my kid .....what a loss this truly is..... Lord I pray when I wake, I swear my lord to take, take my soul, far away from this cruel cruel world... I just cant take it anymore, im wondering where it all went for sure...I dont know... But I know one thing I'll make it better... PT 2 COMING SOON!!!!
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@moderator_en #rapfamesmostwanted #FUCKSOLOSAVAGES #DISSTRACKSOON So Depressed I think Its about time I chill, on the crazy white boy shit and admit I got to chill on this side, just smoke that weed all night, feelin right, feelin nice. Wiz Khalifa on the sourround sound, thinking it's my time, hoping for peace, god hopefully, putting them demons to sleep, theyre so loud, wondering where my life went now, spent on what? Penitentiary nights, that shit got me in a slump, still waking up in cold sweats, I just need a seraquil, I just need to take, my life a little more seriously, so I can put them demons to sleep, finally, god I pray finally, finally, finally... oh finally...... put these demons to sleep I put em to sleep I put them to sleep And now its time to put them demons to sleep... I guess we'll see... life's a lottery... WeGood and holy fuck I won it. You tellin me, went from prison, to prospect, from losing, to top shelf? Money for days I wont stop yet, growing this weed like a professional, I wont stop or quit. Bars for days like a prorep. Gucci shades and my bitch gotta a berkin, she twerkin, up on the pole with them strippas! But what fuck is this? I think I forgot one thing, what was it? OH shit! All this money and women and booze did I forget? I gotta be trippin... Im not winnin... I deserved prison... and all of the bad that will happen now that I didnt stay humble and I only balled out, fucked now, im an alcoholic, cheating loser, woman abuser, fucked up his own life type of pukeshit... I left the one thing behind that no man should leave behind. And that was my kid .....what a loss this truly is..... Lord I pray when I wake, I swear my lord to take, take my soul, far away from this cruel cruel world... I just cant take it anymore, im wondering where it all went for sure...I dont know... But I know one thing I'll make it better... PT 2 COMING SOON!!!!
Wassup @fhenominal, Thank you for sharing 'Failed Father' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Congratulations, we love your song and we added it to our "Rap Fame Fire 🔥 Playlist"! This time you just missed out on Featuring ⭐ here's what you can do to make it next time: - Improve the recording quality| - Maintain your cadence 100% of the time We love the bars "life's a lottery... WeGood and holy fuck I won it" - love the sentiment here! Life is a blessing and you living it that way! We can feel the emotion in those piano tones & you only add to it with your delivery! You got some dope flows here but its all about the consistency! Really getting every single word on point is the mission! ✅ Would be so dope to hear this recorded a lil better cause we can feel the meaning behind this one! Real sh*t! Authentic AF! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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