Joy Giver-Jaydee

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Joy Giver-Jaydee

You Heal My Wounds Every time am hurt, You help me heal. I wish to tell you now Of how, my core feels. A hope, a faith, You are all I crave. You are calm and clear Soft and tender, yet brave. I see, live, and taste dreams With you around. When my soul is not with yours I feel, am going down. May we always stay in love. You Amplify My Joys No tune is merrier than your words, For you sing the sweetest. No heart is closer than yours, You touch me the deepest. Pushing away the sorry times, You carry me to the blessed lanes. Juggling and jumbling the world around, You amplify my joys, downgrade the pains. I shall always love you, Sweetheart.

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4 years ago

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Definitely can improve. You must. Really work on your vocals and your recording quality. Also dude your cadence and flow is non-existent. Really spend time on the creation of your lyrics. but this sounded like I was listening to something on a radio that was made in 1945 or something. that's the realest comment you gon get on here homie.

4 years ago

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