Once In A LifeTime ✨

Name: Once In A LifeTime ✨
Description: I'm doing two versions this the rough draft freestyle version now time to work on the written .... I'm loving the hook 🪝

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I'm doing two versions this the rough draft freestyle version now time to work on the written .... I'm loving the hook 🪝

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Mr Emoji

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4 years ago

I'm doing two versions this the rough draft freestyle version now time to work on the written .... I'm loving the hook 🪝

Cfreely2001

4 years ago

great flow great bars excellent chorus and ik its hard to keep those notes steady I mean I struggle myself but keep working on that FAM I would listen to this on the radio or something

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @mremoji! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Once In A LifeTime ✨'! 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Especially the flow when you spit the bars "put me inside of that casket" is dope! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 We can hear the potential, this sounds like a banger but the quality is just off, unfortunately! Some of your bars are hard to hear, try adding clarity by ensuring the vocals can be heard! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

CALY29

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Double Tha 4th

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.Loaf

2 months ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Kingsley Tochukwu

2 months ago

Your rhymes are tight, and the beat is dope! Mad skills on display! 🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥