hazey

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life's hard but im really trying to make it trying to get out of this place but I'm fading everyone thinks that I'm just shading but it's really not me that their braking fuck I really love misbehaving then it's all there for the taking but I ain't gonna start degrading just for you to go invading and now sat here waiting for you to start engaging look at your eyes all jaded now look at the one's that made it so don't go take it if ya can't make it yo yo I said don't go take it if ya can't make it yeah yeah now I'm sat here waiting in anticipation looking for that violation no face no case that's the best way not to get maced when ya high up on that base and your taken to another space with your eyes in a haze now I'm sat here waiting for the feds to start raiding and for you to stop the hating and for you start relating with everything that i'm saying because Im not just spraying all the stuff that I'm laying and then you start the swaying cause you think im just playing while your sat betraying everything I'm relaying on this darkest dayin and then we start the paying for the jakes to start laying all the while we're praying for us to keep on staying in this place we're made in all the while we keep playing and there's no shame in what we've been saying because my name ain't satan but that's how you get that rating by the pictures your painting so let's go raiding that's all I'm saying

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robs gaming & fishing

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @robsgamingfishing, Here's some feedback on your track 'hazey', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 You definitely got a unique delivery style on this one! We can really feel you on the beat which is dope! Seems authentic! "...I'm fading everyone thinks that I'm just shading but it's really not me that their braking" - you definitely completely on your vibe with this! The track isn't helped by the recording quality tho, try cleaning that up next time. Loving the beat selection, good ear! Rating the emotional vibe of the guitars on this one! It would be dope if you added some speech or a few lyrics in the breakdown section around 1:20! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dess

4 years ago

yeah your vocals are really dope awesome also chek my page

TG_One

4 years ago

minor adjustment vocal leveling 🎤 feedback keep grinding bringing that energy fam much support 💯 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Jay Got Juice

4 years ago

Good delivery, clean mix. Dope accent 😂 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Kross Bone blizz

4 years ago

You ride thebeat well ! Maybe more aggression in your voice on the next song Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥