Hey @marvinbreedlovejr.,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'bottom line'! π₯
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible!
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @marvinbreedlovejr., Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'bottom line'! π₯ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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