Hi there @ypfolapuzp,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Awake', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Produced by my homie Temper. Poured my heart into this track yo
Hi there @ypfolapuzp, Here's some feedback on your track 'Awake', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. π We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
great energy in this track nice work have a blessed day
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