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What's up @0nebeed0, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'R1one - Hatin' (r1)'! π₯ Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! π€ However yuo recording this, just keep it up! "Stackin' every dollar, after dollar, f*ck a bottle b*tch" π₯There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ Maybe try switching that flow up some more on your next track! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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