Yoooo Frankie G what's good! Thanks for submitting this rough draft-- let's check it!
Don't wanna critique this too much seeing as it's a rough draft but let's break it down!
First thing that stand out is the space you left at the beginning in order to build up and introduce the track. Dope promoting rap as a way to cope with what's on your mind. The beat is a really good choice! Also a stand out line off rip is the Big L wordplay at the end.
The energy is pretty dope the entire track but around 2:12 it starts falling off a bit.
Definitely recommend doing this again and working on the mix to bring the vocals out more clearly and make any changes to delivery you may need to.
Over all awesome! Can't wait to hear what else you have otw!
Much love,
-Rap Fame Team
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that's actually.dam...u can rap
Yoooo Frankie G what's good! Thanks for submitting this rough draft-- let's check it! Don't wanna critique this too much seeing as it's a rough draft but let's break it down! First thing that stand out is the space you left at the beginning in order to build up and introduce the track. Dope promoting rap as a way to cope with what's on your mind. The beat is a really good choice! Also a stand out line off rip is the Big L wordplay at the end. The energy is pretty dope the entire track but around 2:12 it starts falling off a bit. Definitely recommend doing this again and working on the mix to bring the vocals out more clearly and make any changes to delivery you may need to. Over all awesome! Can't wait to hear what else you have otw! Much love, -Rap Fame Team
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