I done been through so much I deserve me a crown
had no ps so I started shotting that food round town
just solt some a zd of weed and 2 bags of brown
in the park after dark see opps they get run-down
day. been sweet I been high but now I'm on the come down
with the crew on the hill we be smoking to the sun down
shit was going good until I got my bag robbed
bits of the nugs that had just been cropped
idk why they did me like that. my only chance was hustle to survive and I never stopped.
now beef has changed side have swapped
ppl turning out to be fake I guess the pin has dropped
and shit turns real, gone from shanks to guns getting shopped
then people start dying rapid so that's why more guns get copped
man I swear my ends all fucked back then was on sight an man would get dropped
now it's rolling tinted rides, roll down the window , shots get popped
there was no running after he fell over the fence he hopped
and I can't deal with this pain I got that call my body flopped
said she don't love me cuz her feelings have been lost
and there ain't no going back from the love that she cost
listen
and I wish I didn't get into this beef I just wanna be happy
smoking on exotics with my bros and my girl I'm gonna marry
and she ain't no girl I pick out of fancy
she the type of girl I take holiday let us do some dancing
get back to the room undressing and romancing
I just want the best for her there isn't any acting
but my friends saying the ends are turning to top boy and I gotta agree cuz every man shotting the food on the ends
and sides being taken man get to purchasing skengs
people being killed by people who they used to call friends
man I wish someone tells me were it all ends
overthinking killing me feeling like I've let my girl down trying to make amends
but I promise once we on track we flying to the top whipping round in the Benz
can't make p on roads I just wanted to buy my girl a nice ring with some gems
man I swear i'm gonna treat her nice when this money dispense
won't be long till I'm smoking buds straight from v stems
but first I gotta make it out the ends.
social worker sitting with me telling me she can only help if i co operated
wanting to know my troubles at home she said get your problems out in the fire and let them get incinerated
I told her I can't you dnt understand do you want it to be demonstrated
I got too much on my mind and u can hear when I speak it got me frustrated
so watch how you much cuz one false step in your shoes could leave you ablitorated
I told her she ain't from the streets u can't see where I am I think you'll be better off educated
and don't come here and say it's complicated
why tf did u think I didn't wanna open up, your gonna get me detonated
sick of the dark days I wanna be illuminated
but I got too much bottled up I can't speak to u you don't know what to do to help me cuh no one can my only medication is to get intoxicated.
she said Kris if you listen and concentrated then maybe your head wouldn't be so populated with negative thoughts that leave you feeling dominated and you should calm down on the drink and drugs cuh that will get you terminated and you'll stay rock bottom like you was to the floor, laminated
and I get that these thoughts will have you feeling stressed like you was constipated
and true some people ain't who you anticipated but I'm here to help I get if you don't feel motivated to talk but feelings only get stronger then it gets escalated and people get eliminated see I don't wanna see you aggravated then you put someones face on a shirt like they was animated cuh you can leave it contaminated then when it gets investigated your freedom can be confiscated
and you will look back on this conversation and feel devastated.
remember them days my mum told me to stay away from some yutes that will get me in trouble
but I never listened and now on my own I struggle
on my own I'm out committing crimes just a couple
and on my own I'm out on the roads to hustle
I come a long way but I'm still upcoming
where is my future leading these thoughts can be puzzling
and I been living on the edge sofa hopping cuz I was scared to go home
had to make my own choices from young so no wonder why I'm struggling
had to face a lot of issues on the way with the trust and opps so many emotions in my head it got my anger bubbling
and I been down bad with no p I need to start doubling
too much stacked on mind no wonder im stumbling
under too much pressure feel like I'm crumbling
only so much a kid can take pain got me malfunctioning
call me a dargon cuz I only spit fire
chasing that money cuz there is a lifesty that I desire
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I done been through so much I deserve me a crown had no ps so I started shotting that food round town just solt some a zd of weed and 2 bags of brown in the park after dark see opps they get run-down day. been sweet I been high but now I'm on the come down with the crew on the hill we be smoking to the sun down shit was going good until I got my bag robbed bits of the nugs that had just been cropped idk why they did me like that. my only chance was hustle to survive and I never stopped. now beef has changed side have swapped ppl turning out to be fake I guess the pin has dropped and shit turns real, gone from shanks to guns getting shopped then people start dying rapid so that's why more guns get copped man I swear my ends all fucked back then was on sight an man would get dropped now it's rolling tinted rides, roll down the window , shots get popped there was no running after he fell over the fence he hopped and I can't deal with this pain I got that call my body flopped said she don't love me cuz her feelings have been lost and there ain't no going back from the love that she cost listen and I wish I didn't get into this beef I just wanna be happy smoking on exotics with my bros and my girl I'm gonna marry and she ain't no girl I pick out of fancy she the type of girl I take holiday let us do some dancing get back to the room undressing and romancing I just want the best for her there isn't any acting but my friends saying the ends are turning to top boy and I gotta agree cuz every man shotting the food on the ends and sides being taken man get to purchasing skengs people being killed by people who they used to call friends man I wish someone tells me were it all ends overthinking killing me feeling like I've let my girl down trying to make amends but I promise once we on track we flying to the top whipping round in the Benz can't make p on roads I just wanted to buy my girl a nice ring with some gems man I swear i'm gonna treat her nice when this money dispense won't be long till I'm smoking buds straight from v stems but first I gotta make it out the ends. social worker sitting with me telling me she can only help if i co operated wanting to know my troubles at home she said get your problems out in the fire and let them get incinerated I told her I can't you dnt understand do you want it to be demonstrated I got too much on my mind and u can hear when I speak it got me frustrated so watch how you much cuz one false step in your shoes could leave you ablitorated I told her she ain't from the streets u can't see where I am I think you'll be better off educated and don't come here and say it's complicated why tf did u think I didn't wanna open up, your gonna get me detonated sick of the dark days I wanna be illuminated but I got too much bottled up I can't speak to u you don't know what to do to help me cuh no one can my only medication is to get intoxicated. she said Kris if you listen and concentrated then maybe your head wouldn't be so populated with negative thoughts that leave you feeling dominated and you should calm down on the drink and drugs cuh that will get you terminated and you'll stay rock bottom like you was to the floor, laminated and I get that these thoughts will have you feeling stressed like you was constipated and true some people ain't who you anticipated but I'm here to help I get if you don't feel motivated to talk but feelings only get stronger then it gets escalated and people get eliminated see I don't wanna see you aggravated then you put someones face on a shirt like they was animated cuh you can leave it contaminated then when it gets investigated your freedom can be confiscated and you will look back on this conversation and feel devastated. remember them days my mum told me to stay away from some yutes that will get me in trouble but I never listened and now on my own I struggle on my own I'm out committing crimes just a couple and on my own I'm out on the roads to hustle I come a long way but I'm still upcoming where is my future leading these thoughts can be puzzling and I been living on the edge sofa hopping cuz I was scared to go home had to make my own choices from young so no wonder why I'm struggling had to face a lot of issues on the way with the trust and opps so many emotions in my head it got my anger bubbling and I been down bad with no p I need to start doubling too much stacked on mind no wonder im stumbling under too much pressure feel like I'm crumbling only so much a kid can take pain got me malfunctioning call me a dargon cuz I only spit fire chasing that money cuz there is a lifesty that I desire
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