silly
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β’09 Aug 2022
yeah my son said you a sucka bet a yet you chump chiling on a slump looking all dumb we see you from way over here cant miss ya, actually cant really tell if you a ms. or a mistah but we see you lacking stigma. dont step to us cause we'll take you out so stop running yo mouth.... ya diggggggg
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Hey @rellirell, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'silly'! π₯ You got great bars here. π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. There's a nice concept here running through the track! "...Stop running your mouth, ya Diiiiiig" - you just letting em know that around you they gotta watch theyselves! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ Be sure to try and maintain this as the track goes on! Consistency is key! The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Those kicks are knockin like crazy on this one! Love the guitars too! We'd love to see some more personalized artwork from you! This would really give other listeners an impression of your vibe before they even hear your tracks! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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