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S.J.W

Greenstone

Greenstone

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06 Aug 2022

I threw on that jade jewellery........... GREENSTONE finest craftsman-ship encarved a path that hangz around of my NECK close to my chest near my heart is where it's at as it goes.... there's ah special, gift blueprint from tha motherland priceless bless to protect connect me back too shack on tha track spinning on tha wax ice............ icy cold chilly....... chilling sweet waterfalls springing upon betta know as AOTEAROA wrongful been robbed transcript TRANSLATING explaining tha identity inn identify behind the initials N.Z renaming reshaping faulty treaty documentations ah DAM NATIVE SON FUCKN CRAZY threatened species retaliating another bad creation rejuvenation to extraordinary ORDINARY MAORI session DANGEROUS AND DEADLY deadly and dangerous. (4×) repeat 1,2,3 to 4 fully armed commodore Captain on board bitchs on four's scrubbing up tha deck waxing polishing gear pounamu gem stone up here dark tone smith n glass EXCAVATOR EXCAVATED un-covered out of tha cupboard coming real soon at theatre near you from tha wooden spoon I missed my window off opportunity when I would of been in my prime in room listening to THIRD EYE CREW introduce by none other than A. Z .R AZR tha bro's bigger old bother feeding me ah collection my first contact cassette tape deck will become my hip-hop escape all tha MAD IZM I sourced........and forge ah WU-TANG sword born reformed this Swift brief suitcase summary murder Inc I to need too re-think above tha rim strictly for my niggas and them

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Dope 🔥

2 years ago

Hey @shazkazam77, We're gonna review your track 'Greenstone '. Let's get it! You got great bars here. 🙌 Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Loved the "deadly and dangerous" hook, very catchy and makes the track memorable 💯 Loving the beat selection, good ear! Try to compliment the beat some more, we felt you went off beat sometimes. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! Try improving the overall audio quality so we can hear all your dope bars clearly. You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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