Hey @cornehoe,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Wishlist (2021)'! π₯
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done with this!
Some clean flows right here - delivery is so important. πΆ "Imma hold her til I can't stop breathing" - we can feel the love here!
Good choice of beat on this! πΌ Loving the vocal samples on this one!
Feel the emotional vibes right from the start! π
Nice use of vocal doubling, however your vocal is still a bit unclear, try increasing the volume of one of your takes to instantly boost this one!
Your timing is immaculate tho, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @cornehoe, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Wishlist (2021)'! π₯ Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done with this! Some clean flows right here - delivery is so important. πΆ "Imma hold her til I can't stop breathing" - we can feel the love here! Good choice of beat on this! πΌ Loving the vocal samples on this one! Feel the emotional vibes right from the start! π Nice use of vocal doubling, however your vocal is still a bit unclear, try increasing the volume of one of your takes to instantly boost this one! Your timing is immaculate tho, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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