Hey @rmezzy2crazy,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'talking shit '! π₯
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @rmezzy2crazy, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'talking shit '! π₯ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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