Yo @prirking23,
It's time for us to take a look at 'i keeps it'! π₯
Aight the beat is fire off rip! Love the voice in the back doing the talking. Your bars as far as lyrics go are there. The delivery isn't convincing to how you feel. Not tryna tell you how you feel it just doesn't sound like your heart is in what you're saying if you get what we mean.
Work on the mix and master some more on this, try and reach for another pass if you can!
"I keep it real pack steel just for a meal!" Almost missed this one fam! Really dope line in here fam!
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @prirking23, It's time for us to take a look at 'i keeps it'! π₯ Aight the beat is fire off rip! Love the voice in the back doing the talking. Your bars as far as lyrics go are there. The delivery isn't convincing to how you feel. Not tryna tell you how you feel it just doesn't sound like your heart is in what you're saying if you get what we mean. Work on the mix and master some more on this, try and reach for another pass if you can! "I keep it real pack steel just for a meal!" Almost missed this one fam! Really dope line in here fam! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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