Hey @omaarijones,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on ' deep end'! 💥
Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean.
You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Good choice of beat! 🎼
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording.
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @omaarijones, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on ' deep end'! 💥 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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