A mon père

selphie vision BEN

Author

4 years ago

Lorsque la lumière s’éteint Et que le public est attentif Le soleil restait dehors paraît si lointain La noirceur prend soudain un petit air narratif  Quand tu as rejoint les anges Je pensais que c’était la fin Je ne voyais plus ce joli mésange Les quatre saisons n’y changeraient rien  Lorsque les rideaux se ferment Les spectateurs applaudissent Pas de robe noire et de chrysanthèmes Pour moi tu fais toujours partie du box office   Je ressens à nouveau le soleil Je peux revoir son reflet par terre Ses rayons si chauds me balayent Comme le vent n’est que poussière

Bo Jangles

4 years ago

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adogg7730

4 years ago

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𝕵 LDN

4 years ago

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4 years ago

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Blaze Shmoke

4 years ago

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Celove

4 years ago

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Drastik7

4 years ago

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🆙State Drip on Spotify

4 years ago

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Anthoney Williams

4 years ago

I like the beat Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Can improve 👏

San Buck

4 years ago

nice Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

𝑪𝑬𝑳𝑬$𝑻𝑰𝑨𝑳

4 years ago

right on Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

TMBeatZ

4 years ago

I enjoyed this beat voice suits this beat Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Eric Banks

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @selphievisionben, Thank you for sharing 'A mon père ' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Something's gone a little wrong with the vocals here, play around with the volume and stay the same distance to the mic for the whole track. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Pony Rap 🦄💔

4 years ago

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🔥🔥Ur Boy Fiyah🔥🔥

4 years ago

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TRENCH MADE ENT

4 years ago

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Audio Arsenals

4 years ago

can't understand Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Merkury

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥