every time I want to cry

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Every time I want to cry I feel like i ask myself why I just want to be happy and not talk about. But then I tend to doubt. I just want to scream so loud I don’t feel allowed. I know it gets hard sometimes All I think about is rhymes. Yeah all I think about is rhymes. I guess it’s not my fault Silly me I guess I didn’t taste the salt. Who knew how I felt I’ve been trying to ask in for myself Yourself and me yourself and me that’s all you want All of this time I’ve been realizing you’ve been wanting to haunt me.

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Jackie Horowitz

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @v8ku8zxlmf, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'every time I want to cry'! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi @v8ku8zxlmf! Here's a couple tips for your track 'every time I want to cry'! 💥 1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars! 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. With effects, less can sometimes be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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2 months ago

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7 months ago

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7 months ago

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9 months ago

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