Yo @majesty0497,
We bout to break down your strengths and weaknesses for 'sweet love' so let's get to it! We gotta commend The flow on this is really dope fam and the hook is really creative. We love the beat choice and think it works really well with this concept.
Also your storytelling here is really well done. Not much to improve but maybe the delivery could be a little bit more sporatic. It seems like you want to give more expression to what you saying but hesitated a bit. Still, that's a minor critique, it just sound like you reading in a few places and we know you could bring this to life even more than you already have.
Can't wait to see what else you come thru wit
Keep it up!
-Rap Fame Team!
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Yo @majesty0497, We bout to break down your strengths and weaknesses for 'sweet love' so let's get to it! We gotta commend The flow on this is really dope fam and the hook is really creative. We love the beat choice and think it works really well with this concept. Also your storytelling here is really well done. Not much to improve but maybe the delivery could be a little bit more sporatic. It seems like you want to give more expression to what you saying but hesitated a bit. Still, that's a minor critique, it just sound like you reading in a few places and we know you could bring this to life even more than you already have. Can't wait to see what else you come thru wit Keep it up! -Rap Fame Team!
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