Day One

Bria

Author

4 years ago

When your supposed Day Ones watch you fight for everything you’ve ever wanted and still hate you once you get it.

Oarabile Zicwele

4 years ago

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(◣_◢) SINNAPZ (◣_◢) ©️

4 years ago

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Southwest Slim

4 years ago

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4 years ago

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MRS B

4 years ago

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LordoFlies

4 years ago

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Austin Gunter

4 years ago

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caliber

4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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Kyanna Denice

4 years ago

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Lumen Natura

4 years ago

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Donchuck56

4 years ago

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♠️Qz🇳🇬🇮🇪

4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @mor_267, Here's some feedback on your track 'Day One ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! 🌠 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

cadmus

4 years ago

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4 years ago

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The Riddle Man

4 years ago

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𝑲𝒂𝒄𝒆𝒚 𝑲𝒖𝒓𝒐𝒊 くろい

4 years ago

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