Hey @AlfredJackson.1,
We appreciate you sharing 'fuck the world' with us! π₯
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
The lyrics on this are difficult to make out, but we hear some elements of good flow. The recording quality on this one is letting you down, if you can fix this up we know this track would defo be enhanced. Keep up the good work and you'll find your sound!
Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! π
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @AlfredJackson.1, We appreciate you sharing 'fuck the world' with us! π₯ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat choice is great for you! πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The lyrics on this are difficult to make out, but we hear some elements of good flow. The recording quality on this one is letting you down, if you can fix this up we know this track would defo be enhanced. Keep up the good work and you'll find your sound! Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! π We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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