Hey @vile_style,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Pizzarolls'! π₯
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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I like pizza rollsπ₯π₯
Hey @vile_style, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Pizzarolls'! π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
nice to meet you at the rap fame keep it up so trying to get a chance
@onyo thanks broski!
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Love the new song bro! Keep up the hard work!
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The rhythm, the flow, everything about this is just pure flames! π΅π₯ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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