Yo @leespazzmix!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'FirstTake1TakeS1-3'! ๐ฅ
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. ๐
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ
The general audio quality is lacking, cleaning that up will instantly boost this track.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Yo @leespazzmix! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'FirstTake1TakeS1-3'! ๐ฅ Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. ๐ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ The general audio quality is lacking, cleaning that up will instantly boost this track. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. ๐ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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