if I want to shine
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4 years ago

Hey @ttythebest! Thanks for sharing 'if I want to shine' with us! 💥 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

4 years ago

Checking in I love the concept lil bro it fits everything in the video keep it up n use your lips more to your vocals so it won't look like u lip rapping...this is Fye 💯 cause I feel the same way at times...Got no Home to go too....love it

love you guy keep it up bro we grow up by lifting others keep trying to get more money and followers seriously I love your voice follow me please so I will be liking your raps back to back and reply so the will promote me bro and like the comments view my profile

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love you guy keep it up bro we grow up by lifting others keep trying to get more money and followers seriously I love your voice follow me please so I will be liking your raps back to back and reply so the will promote me bro and like the comments view my profile

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🔥💯🔥💯 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK FAM RT G SALUTE FAM FWM #ROYALTYRADIO SUBSCRIBE to THE PLAYLIST

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