Hey @javonboyd,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'RIP 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾 Kobe Bryant and Gigi Bryant '! 💥
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
The recording is a little fuzzy tho, try improving the sound quality if you can.
Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @javonboyd, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'RIP 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾 Kobe Bryant and Gigi Bryant '! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording is a little fuzzy tho, try improving the sound quality if you can. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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