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been around it for days ever since a young age forced to grow up wild up in the streets kicked out and left to roam all alone i was tryna find a home i was lost didnt no who i was all because i never had a father figure he was lost as cold as jack frost so im glad that he stayed away i had to break away away from the lonly days mind made up need to get payed liverpool the city of slave trade erase the name plates city of culture nah racist black hate
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been around it for days ever since a young age forced to grow up wild up in the streets kicked out and left to roam all alone i was tryna find a home i was lost didnt no who i was all because i never had a father figure he was lost as cold as jack frost so im glad that he stayed away i had to break away away from the lonly days mind made up need to get payed liverpool the city of slave trade erase the name plates city of culture nah racist black hate
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